Written by Ms.AlwarMay 18, 2015 #15 : Monday Morning Haiku (MMH) “Will you wait for me? Forever?” He questioned. She smiled, “Yes. But will you make me wait forever?” Advertisements Share this:TwitterFacebookGoogleLike this:Like Loading... Related 13 thoughts on “#15 : Monday Morning Haiku (MMH)” Pure love at first sight with this post! ! I am your fan seriously 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Aww ! Thanku so much 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Hmmmm! So much said in just 3 lines. Loved the pic! 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thanku 🙂 LikeLike Reply Loved the poem. Loved the picture. But I admit, I didn’t see the connection. Unless he did make her wait until she was old? LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Broken promises… 😦 in my head he made her wait… but she hasn’t given up on him. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply That’s sad… I thought it was more a statement that everyone is young inside even if they’re old outside. LikeLiked by 2 people That’s possible too 🙂 LikeLike How about “beauty is in the eyes of the beholder”. As leftoverrecipes noted, she has physically aged but is still a young woman on the inside. Is that how she sees herself, or is that how he sees her?????? LikeLiked by 1 person Maybe thats how they see each other… in their minds.. he still sees her as the young, beautiful woman he made promises to.. even though years have passed.. he still clings on to the belief that she’s still hopeful… and waiting for his return. She realises that he still hasnt fulfilled his promise of returning, but Sherrie she thinks of him, the time they spent together, She can’t help but feel the bbutterflies in her stomach and the magical tingles she used to feel before. That takes her back to her youth… the memories of love so intense and powerful that she feels that the clock’s turned back. P.S.: just my imagination talking 😉 LikeLiked by 1 person I’ve experimented with long 5-7-5 versions and love the idea I created. but what type of haiku is yours? LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Beautiful and picturesque. 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thanku 🙂 🙂 LikeLike Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) w Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.